Tuesday, June 12, 2007

Frozen Tears..

Often in life you

Smile, altough your heart feels like breaking..

Smile, altough you are hurt inside..

Smile, altough you feel like crying your lungs out..

Smile, with a lump in your throat that even loved ones don't notice..

And then you wish all your tears turned into Frozen ice, Frozen tears!!

15 comments:

venkat viswanathan said...

really touching one

venkat

Smitha said...

Dhanyechi,
I can feel it when I read it... It's poured down from your heart... Really nice

Dhanya said...

@ Venkat: Thank you Venkat n welcome to my blog :)

@Smitha: Thank you.. ithokke ente oru number alle ;)

Resma T said...

Yes, I knew its right from ur heart..Nice one.

Fozylet said...

really well written...

y frozen?

tears break you and make you

like time, "move on" is the key. frozen is not natural.

Dhanya said...

@ Resma : Thank you :)

@ Sajin : Thank you.. Yep I know frozen not natural.. that's why you wish it to be like that so that no one realises you have tears in ur eyes ;)

Sini said...

Beautiful words...

Madhurima said...

hmmm...
frozen tears have their place;
they cover the scar on ur face...
n you move on like nothing happened...
little does the world know that the feel remains!
simple and ethereal...thats is how your piece is..

Dhanya said...

@ Richy: Oh God.. Richy, I'm perfectly hail n healthy.. People reading your comment will think this is a result of some love failures!!!!
And do you think I will allow anything to hurt me?? This was just a work of fiction..

@ Sini : Thank you :)

Dhanya said...

@ Madhurima : Thank you Madhu. Nice to get such comments from a poet like you :)

Richy! [ರಿಚಿ] said...

Ok ok ..
I take back my words [:D]

Dhanya said...

@ Richy : Good boy :)

Jeseem said...

hey why frozen tears ?
when u smile, it should be a smile from inside you.

Dhanya said...

@ Jeseem: That is when you are happy n smiling not when u r sad n u want to hide it ;)

Aju said...

good one..!!but i think the person shuld be in artic region..!!jus kiddng

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